Thursday, October 4, 2012

What pro says about Information System (Review)


In my first blog, I wrote about my major, what I want to do with that major, and what my major offers me for my future. In the second blog, I wrote about blogging -- what it is and what makes it different from other content writings. In this blog, I would like to talk about the combination between those two blogs -- combination between talking about my major and blogging itself; also, how I will try to see other people's blogs that have similar discipline and interest with me.

The first website that I would like to talk about is a blog by Tim Funk, What the Heck is Information System. This article can be seen by clicking this link: http://www.mycollegesandcareers.com/2011/03/what-the-heck-is-information-systems/ In this article, Tim Funk talks about how he meets a lot of people who try to act like they know what Information System is when they really have no idea what it really is. This is not a super-long blog, yet I feel that it conveys the important points of what Information System really is and what kind of jobs are available in this discipline. Another pro that I see from his article is that he uses a laid-back, conversational language to speak his words; this writing style makes his writing become much more enjoyable and easy to follow. It is also a good thing to have "about me" section on his blog because it shows the readers that he has a good knowledge in this type of work-field. However, there are a couple of things that could be added into the article which could improve his blog. The first one would be providing outside sources that would strengthen his points and gives more credibility to the writing. Another thing that I feel could be improved in his blog is the development of the context. Even though his blog touches a lot of important things, yet there are many sentences that need to be explained in better detail. For example, Funk says, "It is one of the best degrees in a down economy because it is essentially a combination of two degrees(accounting and business and will help open twice as many doors after you graduate" -- why Information System is combination between accounting and business? This sentence is confusing because he does not say anything about how Information System and accounting are related.

Another blog that I find really interesting is Career Options in Information System Management written by Rhonda Campbell, Demand Media. This blog is much longer than the previous one, focuses on the type of job that Information System students can expect when they graduate from school. This blog is much more solid than the previous one because it clearly shows the direction that the writer is focusing on. Campbell explains each job with great details and provides the salary information for each job and what is being expected to be done. Another strong point on this blog is that the writer provides the sources that strengthen the points. The only thing that I feel that is lacking is the visual of this blog, the writer could have added some videos of people who are currently working in this discipline. This blog can be seen on http://work.chron.com/career-options-information-system-management-2323.html

Monday, October 1, 2012

Blog, is it fun or not?

Blogging – we often hear it – people getting popular because of their blog sites, gaining fans as they add the contents of their pages. Many people might think that a blogger is the same as a magazine writer or newspaper editor. However, they are not the same in terms of interest and writing philosophy. Every blogger would or should have his own writing style and his specialties; there are bloggers who love to talk about their own personal experiences and there are also bloggers who prefer to discuss popular events around them. There are many different genres of blogs, from sport blog to cooking blog. People choose blogging as a way to express themselves, like they would make a personal diary for themselves, except blogging means their personal diaries would be seen (or intended to be seen) by the whole world. But really, what is a blog? What differentiates it from other types of writing? Is it something similar as our essays or is it more like our Facebook posts? Every person might have different answer for this, but for me comparison between blog and other writings would be very objective, because all of them have their own uniqueness and have their own “fun.”

My sister used to be a blogger back when she was still in college. At that time I did not know what a blog was and what differentiated it from an article in a magazine. I tried to read her blog, yet did not find it interesting because she wrote about dietary procedure and things that were related to it. Thinking of that makes me wonder, what is the real “genre” of a blog itself that really differentiate it from article, essay, or journal? I feel that blog is much more entertaining than an article, because in most articles, the writers will only state facts and the researches about the topic that they are writing about. On the other hand, blogger should be able to express their own opinion, spice up the argument by raising controversial arguments, yet is still able to provide credible sources in which support the arguments. Without those sources, a blog will look dull and unprofessional, who wants to read a blog that full of lies anyway?

Here is one article that talks about what differentiate content writing with blog writing, (Difference Between Content Writing and Blog Writing). The author of this article, Vivcek Sharma explains in depth the difference between article and blog. Unlike article, he believes that in blog there is a room for improvement for the writer to edit the blog later on, which is a good thing since it is very flexible for the writers. On the other hand, in an article, the final post has to be perfect or else the writing will look amateur and unprofessional. Basically, what I learnt from reading this article is that writing a blog is a never ending process. Readers will simultaneously give feedbacks to the bloggers on what they think could be improved, and bloggers may take note on that for future. Blog is more laid out writing process in which the basic idea is to engage with other person, try to get feedback as much as one could. I believe that this is a much more efficient process for “student writers” because, unlike the experienced writers, we as students are still learning all of the writing processes. We are still experimenting on what is our best writing style, which way do we enjoy our writing the most, and more, so blogging could be used as a practice tool to improve our writing and conversational skills.

So, can we write a blog very informally unlike those essays that we do in most of our English classes? Well, yes we could, but our blog will most likely to lose its credibility and professionalism. Even though blogs certainly are not as formal as our essay assignments and those articles in newspaper, yet it still requires a good grammatical structure, a valid point and argument, and of course it has to be entertaining. In fact, there are many blogs that look like article or vice versa. (Difference Between Blog and Article) I found this link which discusses about this argument with much greater explanation. The author of this post explains about the difference that really divides these two are writing into two different things. "By writing an article instead of a blog, readers perceive that care has been taken in writing an article and therefore the information contained must be trustworthy. On the other hand, customers may suspect that a blog will have a personal spin to it and the writers are trying to promote something that they have vested interest in. If your aim is to market a product or service, then better use an article. If you have no marketing intention but merely want to get something off your chest, by all means create a blog."


In the end, I think that blogging would be much more interesting for those who do not really seek for a writing that will give an intense feeling when reading it, yet still would give them, as readers, a new fresh idea of the topic that the writer brings up. I feel that blogging is intended for those writers who love to express their thoughts and feelings without being judged and criticized by other people yet will still be able to get feedback and comments on what could be improved on the writing. Unlike articles and essays which focus on the content and the structure of the writing, blog is more like a continuous writing process that focuses on the interaction between the writer and the reader. However, it all comes down to personal taste – some people prefer to read an article because they believe it is more reliable, while others might find article boring and prefer to read a blog because there is more interaction between the writer and the readers. So, which one do you prefer?



Monday, September 17, 2012

My Major


Hi everyone, my name is Brianto Hanitio and I'm originally come from Indonesia, this is my third year living here in San Francisco. Right now I am currently enrolled in San Francisco State University. This is my second semester here in SFSU, I transferred from City College of San Francisco last spring and I really like this school so far (other than the budget cut of course).  My dream was to become a car designer or any kind of jobs that related to car, because I love cars and all the modifications. However, in Indonesia car industry is totally different than in United States, Europe, and Japan. In Indonesia the labor fee is very low, last time I checked a car mechanic will only get about $500/month which is not enough for you to have a good life. I feel that there is no point paying all of these money, but end up getting paid that low. Anyway, I end up choosing Information System as my major because I think that this major has a really good prospect and it also supported with the fact that my dad really encourages me to study this major. However though, I feel most people still unfamiliar with this major. Most people might have heard of it before, but never really understand what can you expect from an Information System graduate and what Information System do in our life. Most of people assume that information system and computer science are basically the same thing. Well true, both of them study computer, but they have so many differences that each of them have their own strength and uniqueness. Information system focuses more on the organization itself, how will a software that has been developed before can help organization to be more effective and efficient. Many people do not realize that Information System is everywhere, from BART station, ATM, online banking to most of the websites we use daily (San Francisco State University - Information System Homepage). Information systems are a collection of data that being linked and grouped together to give a desired or requested outcome or information. The computer software or programs that usually being used by people who work in information system field are Business System Analyst, Visible Analyst, Visual Studio, and many other more programs. So, basically the main difference of Information System and Computer Science is the focuses, Information System focuses on the business itself, whereas Computer Science focuses on the science on creating the software and programs. What’s the difference between Information Systems (IS); Computer Science (CS); and Electrical Engineering (EE)? This article provides a table in which will explain some core differences between Information System and Computer Science. The author of this article states how the core skill on Information System major is more into problem solving rather than logic which is definitely suit my hobby and interest. Well, I hope that this post give you a general idea about who I am, what my interests are, and especially what this blog will discuss about.